Digital Portfolio Investigation

The first blog i saw was too dark. The girl who did this blog had cool links and I liked the first page other than the backround becasue it was very dark. Her blog had some links that are still under construction as she calls it. On her page "about me" is not clear because of the colors she had (which were very blue). Some of her links were not found so i didn't see all her pages. On her personal staement she had it in bulletpoints which is easier to read than full lenght paragraphs. When i complete my blog I'll make sure that what's written is clear and all my links work. This is the link to her webblog: http://www.isdweblogs.org/vanille/

The second blog i saw was too blank. it didn't have creative links and tranzitions. her personal statement was in almost three long paragraphs. i didn't like the idea because it has a lot of writing. Her digital portfolio page was in bullet points and it had the reflection beside it. only 2 links were unclickable but the rest were good. she had a page with what she did for her community and service. this is the link to her webblog:http://www.isdweblogs.org/qareena/